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Submitted Work

Movie Projects

Scripts

Title Average Rating Downloads Date
Created

America's Ben Franklin in: The Electrocution String Vicky's 1st Draft (Script 37)

No rating
29 01/24/12

The Road to Atlantis Vicky's 2nd Draft (Script 2)

No rating
9 12/14/11

Deadly Reflections Vicky's 2nd Draft (Script 2)

No rating
10 11/16/11

The Lone Crusader Vicky's Original Draft (Script 1)

4.0 stars
(1)
17 09/28/11

Deadly Reflections Vicky's Original Draft (Script 1)

5.0 stars
(1)
12 09/28/11

The Road to Atlantis Vicky's Original Draft (Script 1)

3.0 stars
(1)
11 09/22/11

Series Projects

Pilot Scripts

Title Average Rating Plays/
Downloads
Date
Created

Alphabet Angie Pilot Script 1

No rating
- 09/13/14

Chloe's Corner Pilot Script 1

5.0 stars
(1)
5 05/25/13

My Girlfriend's Son is Satan Pilot Script 1 - Original Version

No rating
5 05/10/13

I'm With Stupid Pilot Script 1

No rating
9 06/10/12

Strangers With Kandie Pilot Script 1

No rating
8 06/06/12

Abby's Adventures Pilot Script 1

4.0 stars
(1)
14 06/01/12

Miss Marple's Marvelous Imagination Pilot Script 1

No rating
17 05/05/12

Mini-bibles

Title Average Rating Plays/
Downloads
Date
Created

Alphabet Angie Mini-bible 1

No rating
1 09/13/14

Chloe's Corner Mini-bible 1 - Chloe's Corner

No rating
10 05/25/13

My Girlfriend's Son is Satan Mini-bible 1 - Original bible

No rating
2 05/10/13

I'm With Stupid Mini-bible 1 - I'm With Stupid

No rating
7 06/10/12

Strangers With Kandie Mini-bible 1 - Strangers With Kandie

No rating
10 06/06/12

Abby's Adventures Mini-bible 1 - Abby's Adventures

No rating
16 06/01/12

Miss Marple's Marvelous Imagination Mini-bible 1 - Miss Marple's Marvelous Imagination

No rating
18 05/05/12

About

I am a produced screenwriter with 14 short film credits, 20 options, two features: "Deadly Karma" and "Demon Tongue" on video, and a feature "Grimmerson Manor" in development. I have written 70+ feature screenplays in many genres and budgets over the past 25 years, continuously adding more. I have also completed many shorts/features for different filmmakers.

My goal isn't necessarily to be a big Hollywood writer, but to be a successful writer. Getting a Hollywood film would be a huge bonus.
 

Reviews Vicky Has Written

Mathilde Video 4 - Sean Tracy's Trailer

5 stars
Nice job! You made a believer out of me that those punches were real!
January 17, 2012

The Alchemist Agenda Video 6 - Action

5 stars
Well done!
January 12, 2012

The Alien Diaries Video 1 - Teaser Trailer

4 stars
A nice little trailer without an actual film to work off of. The music was perfect!
January 07, 2012

Blood Money ~ Payback Time, David's Original Draft

1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

A lot of action in a quick read!

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
November 13, 2011
This was one of the quickest reads I have had in some time. The writer knows how to write actions that carry a punch but take up little space. The dialogue, overall, was very real and believable. Voice overs are tough to make work in a script, but David did this very well. They made me think of the old detective films of the 40s where voice overs would be used throughout the story to fill in the audience on what was going on in the investigation.

If I had one concern, it would be that Nick needs something to make him more likable while he's kicking the scumbags' asses. He has lost family, but that really doesn't play into the story very much. It wouldn't hurt to add a female role, maybe someone Nick takes an interest in and does nice things for so we see that he is a caring man to counteract all of the bad things he does to the low lives. Cleaning up the street scum may not be quite enough. It wouldn't take much to push him over the threshold.

There was just so much to like about this script. David's knowledge of weapons really showed. That's very important for a writer to pull off. It is a well-crafted script that would make a very entertaining film.
 

Rose and Los Singing Bagels, C.'s Original Draft

1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

A very nice start!

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
October 20, 2011
I thought this script was different, in a good way. It definitely has potential. I really liked the relationship between Rose and Maggie. A little more time between them, memories, feelings, would make their relationship even stronger. Those two could use a little more since they were the best.

You do write well. Most of the time, I didn't have any trouble following what was going on. There is a good deal of tension between the characters and resolution to those that require it.

Overall, a very good job. Thanks for the read!
 

Favorite Movies

Original Star Wars Trilogy
Indiana Jones films (excluding Krystal Skull)
Titanic
Avatar
The Dark Knight
Jurassic Park
Pirates of the Caribbean
 

Influences

Star Wars is the film that got me started. I wanted to write something big like that. I think I have, only they haven't been produced yet.
 

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