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Scripts

Title Average Rating Downloads Date
Created

America's Ben Franklin in: The Electrocution String V. L.'s 1st Draft (Script 57)

No rating
20 01/30/12

Series Projects

Pilot Scripts

Title Average Rating Plays/
Downloads
Date
Created

Fairy Dust Pilot Script 1

5.0 stars
(1)
3 05/12/14

Old Scores Pilot Script 1 - Operation Getting Even

No rating
8 05/04/13

Mini-bibles

Title Average Rating Plays/
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Date
Created

Fairy Dust Mini-bible 1

5.0 stars
(1)
10 05/12/14

About

I understand that writing is a craft that takes an unending willingness to learn, patience and an appreciation for the opinion of others. I'm willing to give it all.
 

Reviews V. L. Has Written

Jobseekers, Pilot Script 1 - Back to work.

3 stars
The dialogue was very funny. Some of the characters, like Nigel, William and Ola were developed well. The episode ends strangely.
April 15, 2017

The Lakeland Odd Soks, Mini-bible 1

4 stars
I really like the concept and the art. I would have loved to see a pilot script.
May 19, 2014

Tumble Leaf Short Video 2 - Show Opener

4 stars
Good voice acting, song and animation, but is the "LEAF" what starts all the journeys? If so, I would've liked for the fox to say "let's see where "tumble leaf" takes us today" or something like that.
May 19, 2014

The Crazy Adventures of Maximus & Lola, Mini-bible 1 - Original

5 stars
I like the fact that Max writes these stories. Very nice.
May 12, 2014

Project: High School, Pilot Script 1 - Episode #0: Rancid Asparagus Pie

4 stars
This was a fun read. I like the relationship between the kids and the weird teachers. However, I ddin't like that the kids already knew about the experiments and dialogue between holly and her brother
September 09, 2013

Journal of a Narrator, Joel's Original Draft

0 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Beautiful, but Monotone

Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
 
Premise:
No rating
 
Story structure:
No rating
 
Character:
No rating
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
September 02, 2013
From the first page, this screenplay has a beautiful cinematic quality to its action descriptions and the narrator's voice is very poetic.

There is also some witty humor here and there that makes you laugh unexpectedly, for example the rabbit being lucky because it has four rabbit's feet : )

The story about the boy and the way he seems to move about the world is very unique, but overall, I couldn't stay with this story as a reader. Despite the narrator's beautiful words, after twenty pages of it, it became monotone and I couldn't figure out where the story was going. I gave up reading upon reaching page 25.

I think the writer is very talented. I'm sure one day he'll perfect the art of screenwriting, and I absolutely think he should consider writing a novel, what a beautiful way to write.
 

Favorite Movies

I don't care much for horror, but otherwise, I like pretty much everything.

Some of the movies that I think are good are:

Fight Club
Catch Me if You Can
There's Something About Mary
The Game
The Matrix
Lilo and Stitch
The Corps Bride
 

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