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Oona Crate and The Wizard Of Dark Street, Shawn's Original Draft

1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Wonderful - albeit a bit derivative

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
February 04, 2016
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The Welsh Files, Pilot Script 1 - How Green Is My Valley

4 stars
I didn't get through the whole thing, but I love the whole Stella-meets-X-Files theme. It would have been better to start with some action, instead of lots of dialog. But otherwise great! Yakki Da!
February 03, 2016

The Vagabond And Malign, Amla's Original Draft

2 out of 2 people found the following review helpful:

Needs work.

Overall Recommendation:
2 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
2 stars
 
Character:
1 stars
 
Dialogue:
2 stars
 
Emotion:
1 stars
 
January 20, 2016
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USER: CHARLIE, david's Original Draft

2 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

NO FEEDBACK HERE

Overall Recommendation:
1 stars
 
Premise:
1 stars
 
Story structure:
1 stars
 
Character:
1 stars
 
Dialogue:
1 stars
 
Emotion:
1 stars
 
November 30, 2015
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Cold Callers, Pilot Script 1 - Call Waiting

3 stars
Pretty good! Relies on using licensed music that might be prohibitively expensive. Craft is very good -- just might need to be tightened a bit.
November 28, 2015

Cold Callers, Mini-bible 1

4 stars
The series idea is really great. I'd like to see how this would work on screen. The logline needs work -- too conversational - doesn't make for good reading with phrases like 'are what results' etc
November 28, 2015

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