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America's Ben Franklin in: The Electrocution String, Gordon's 1st Draft

2 out of 4 people found the following review helpful:

Hot, Cool, Fast & Funny!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
January 25, 2012
LOL! Heavens to Betsy! After she seduces old Ben, I'll never look at the stars (and stripes) the same way again!
Love the parasail chase, really a cool scene.
"Poor Richard" is much funnier and smarter in this version -- he could spin-off into his own series!
 

SAMARANG, Gordon's Original Draft

0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Exciting action, fascinating characters!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
January 25, 2012