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Title Average Rating Downloads Date
Created

The Case of The Empty Case Alan's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
2 06/22/16

About

almost 50 years in show business
freelance film & TV director
advertising creative
 

Reviews Alan Has Written

Grand Theft UFO, Chris's 3rd Draft

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Well written, terrific project

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
June 07, 2012
 

And There's No Lovely Vanna, Pilot Script 1 - Perhaps It's Lacrosse

3 stars
You did search/replace on character STAN ... need to fix underCHARLIEd, assiCHARLIEt, AfghaniCHARLIE. Best part was CT scan. Have the boys look down in their own pants.
June 05, 2012

Horseplay: A Genre's Last Stand, Pilot Script 1 - Horseplay

4 stars
Very funny. Good work.
June 02, 2012

The Heavy, Pilot Script 2 - Fixed a few errors

4 stars
Good situation, likeable characters, extra credit for good use of the medium with slo-mo scene and breaking the timeline to show a surreal lampoon of the antagonist's vanity.
June 02, 2012

Favorite Movies

Mr Smith Goes to Washington, Anatomy of a Murder, All That Jazz
 

Influences

Capra, Kubrick, Zinnemann, DeMille, Chandler, Fitzgerald, Hammett
 

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