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Title Average Rating Downloads Date
Created

ZvG: Zombies Vs Gladiators Rick's 5th Draft (Script 65)

No rating
10 08/29/11

ZvG: Zombies Vs Gladiators Rick's 4th Draft (Script 38)

4.0 stars
(2)
18 08/23/11

American Made Rick's 2nd Draft (Script 2)

3.0 stars
(1)
14 07/30/11

American Made Rick's Original Draft (Script 1)

4.5 stars
(2)
7 07/28/11

YouTube Famous Rick's 1st Draft (Script 5)

4.8 stars
(4)
32 07/20/11

I'm With the Band Rick's 1st Draft (Script 2)

4.8 stars
(4)
13 07/16/11

SWISH Rick's 1st Draft (Script 2)

5.0 stars
(4)
17 07/15/11

Veterans Rick's 1st Draft (Script 5)

No rating
8 07/14/11

Bite Me Rick's 1st Draft (Script 2)

5.0 stars
(1)
16 07/14/11

The Umpire Rick's 1st Draft (Script 2)

5.0 stars
(4)
34 07/13/11

ZvG: Zombies Vs Gladiators Rick's 3rd Draft (Script 12)

5.0 stars
(4)
52 07/11/11

ZvG: Zombies Vs Gladiators Rick's 2nd Draft (Script 10)

4.5 stars
(10)
52 07/10/11

Why Rick's Original Draft (Script 1)

3.0 stars
(2)
17 07/10/11

The Truth: The Nathan Fredericks Story Rick's Original Draft (Script 1)

3.6 stars
(7)
22 12/29/10

Reviews Rick Has Written

Cat Dingas Survives the Wild, Kristie's 7th Draft

1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Great job on an Entertaining Script

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
July 30, 2011
I really enjoyed this story. The premise was very interesting, and realistic given all the stories we hear about reality stars going wild on a regular basis. The character of Cat Dingas is so well-rounded. He seems like he has so many different facets of him character that come out. He's one of the most complex characters I have read in a script on here and that's a definite compliment to you.

The story is entertaining and kept me engaged throughout. You obviously have a true sense of humor. This is probably where your script impressed me the most. Comedy is probably one of toughest genres to do right - meaning that it's actually funny. This shows that you are a talented writer that can tell a story in a humorous way. I liked that I didn't feel you added jokes to just be funny. It felt like the humor was a natural part of the story.

It's hard to give suggestions for such a solid script. I think one thing I might consider is the title. When I first heard the title, I did not at all envision this story. I thought of an actual cat surviving in a adventure story like "The Incredible Journey." That's so not what this story is. It's a great story and one that people need to see.
 

"The Underground", David's Original Draft

2 out of 6 people found the following review helpful:

Very Good Script

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
July 16, 2011
I was initially interested in this script because of the Synopsis. I was drawn into the story beginning on the first page. I really like the character of Elizabeth. She is kind of an Everywoman. She is a character that is very easily to relate to and like in general - hard working, ambitious, nice. I know I could relate to her work drive and being a workaholic.

This is such a great premise. I have toured some sites that used to be an Underground Railroad site and there's almost always ghosts rumored to be living in the those areas. Very interesting and I was impressed with how historically accurate this script is.

This script is very suspenseful and had me hooked from the first scene to the last. It's a very easy read. Just make sure that you have a little time before starting it, because you won't want to put this one down. Also, I wouldn't recommend reading this late at night, especially if you're alone.
 

Get Motivated, A's 8th Draft

1 out of 2 people found the following review helpful:

Final 15 pages

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
December 31, 2010
Per the request of Stephen, my critique is on the final 15 pages. I love the action in you have in your finale. It's really intense and I am sure it will leave moviegoers leaving the theater feeling very satisfied. It's one of those movie endings that makes you walk out of the dark theater saying to yourself, "Wow!"

The action is spectacular, but I feel your dialogue could be improved. It's hard to write exceptional dialogue. I have trouble doing it myself. There's nothing wrong with it technically but I just question if all the characters would react in that way in such a situation. But that's just my two cents. I could be wrong. And again, I haven't read the whole script, so please take my critique with a grain of salt.

Overall, good job and one that I would go see!
 

DON'T SAY ANYTHING, Terry's 8th Draft

2 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

15 page swap

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
December 31, 2010
The first thing I must talk about here is the dialogue. I love it! Absolutely love it! You have a lot of dialogue here but it never get a bit boring. You have found a way to make each character unique and the dialogue reveals the personality of the character. I was very drawn in and want to here more.

I haven't read the whole script but Mary makes me a bit uneasy, but I am sure she's written that way. She seems quite unhinged and liable to let her fury be unleashed at any moment. I cetainly wouldn't want to wind up on her bad side.

Awesome job!
 

Crofton Triangle, Michelle 's 2nd Draft

2 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

15 page swap

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
December 31, 2010
I really like this story. It starts very interesting and leaves me wanting to know more. It's the kind of story that really moves itself along quickly and gets the reader involved from the very beginning. I felt like I was standing there watching the events unfold.

I would advise to be careful with tense in narrating action. I really struggle with this and it's hard to get it perfect.

The action in the section is very good and doesn't become boring or uninteresting.

Great work!
 

Megorf, the fallen god, Stephanie's 5th Draft

1 out of 2 people found the following review helpful:

Great engaging tale

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
December 31, 2010
This script was very engaging. This is not typically my genre of choice, but still the strength on the story drew me in. The movie opens with an exciting scene and then there is a dream sequence a short time later. This writer is extremely decrypting and precise. This makes the entire story easy to understand and follow.

I was happy to see original characters that were obviously very different. The 3 girls reminded me of the witches in Shakespeare's MacBeth and the fates which appear in Greek tragedies, such as Sophocles' Oedipus trilogy. I like this touch. I also liked the addition of the narrator in the beginning.

I would go see this movie and suspect it would be quite a hit with Lord of the Rings fans.
 

Favorite Movies

ET, Rain Man, Fried Green Tomatoes, Titanic, Avatar, any movie with a strong message and strong characters
 

Influences

Alfred Hitchcock, James Cameron, Steven Spielberg
 

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