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Submitted Work

Movie Projects

Videos

Title Average Rating Plays/
Downloads
Date
Created

Plaything Video 1 - Plaything

No rating
1 07/01/16

Scripts

Title Average Rating Downloads Date
Created

D.I.P. Drug Induced Psychosis Skylar's 2nd Draft (Script 2)

No rating
2 11/25/13

D.I.P. Drug Induced Psychosis Skylar's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
1 11/20/13

Tripping Time Skylar's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
- 07/14/13

Series Projects

Pilot Scripts

Title Average Rating Plays/
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Date
Created

Hustle To Hollywood Pilot Script 1 - Original script. Work In Progress

No rating
4 06/30/16

Hollywood House Pilot Script 1 - Welcome To Hollywood

No rating
3 02/21/16

Going Wilde Pilot Script 1 - Wilde Is Magic

5.0 stars
(2)
6 06/15/13

Mini-bibles

Title Average Rating Plays/
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Date
Created

Going Wilde Mini-bible 1 - Going Wilde Mini Bible

No rating
3 06/16/13

About

Comedian, Writer, Thespian, Lesbian, Walker, Talker, Wooden leg carver, Amateur chimp wrangler
 

Reviews Skylar Has Written

America's Ben Franklin in: The Electrocution String, Jason's Table Read

0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Still a great concept

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
2 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
2 stars
 
June 18, 2013
After viewing the table read, I did get a better since of the comedy. I think there are a few issues with comedic timing and the lack of subtlety. Especially in the case of George Washington. What you have in the comedy of Americas Ben Franklin is more of a action filled Benny Hill episode and what I think you were trying to pull off is more Austin Powers.

Let me reiterate that I love the concept. Ben Franklin is one of my favorite historical figures; I applaud the creators of this piece for such an awesome concept. Ben Franklin as a James Bond type totally works. My issue is the comedy within Americas Ben Franklin. It seems to lean more towards slap-stick and British wit. Very Python-esque. I don't think the humor connects with the character. Maybe the story should lean less on the humor and more on the Action Adventure. Lets say, more like a National Treasure. Overall the story is very well written and again I love the concept.
 

America's Ben Franklin in: The Electrocution String, Jamster's 6th Draft

1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

I love the concept.

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
3 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
2 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
2 stars
 
June 18, 2013
Ben Franklin is one of my favorite historical figures; I applaud the creators of this piece for such an awesome concept. Ben Franklin as a James Bond type totally works. My issue is the comedy within Americas Ben Franklin. It seems to lean more towards slap-stick and British wit. Very Python-esque. I don't think the humor connects with the character. Maybe the story should lean less on the humor and more on the Action Adventure. Lets say, more like a National Treasure. Overall the story is very well written and again I love the concept.
 

Going Wilde, Pilot Script 1 - Wilde Is Magic

5 stars
It's my script
June 15, 2013

Favorite Movies

A Clock Work Orange, Singing In The Rain, The Last Dragon, Dune, Scarface, Bananas, You've Got Mail, Shakes The Clown
 

Influences

Comedy - George Carlin, Woody Allen, Richard Pryor, Eddie Murphy, Joe Rogan, Robin Harris

Directing - Stanley Kubrick, Tim Burton, David Lynch, Penny Marshall

 

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