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Title Average Rating Downloads Date
Created

The Alpha Transient Robert's 2nd Draft (Script 2)

5.0 stars
(1)
16 01/24/12

The Alpha Transient Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
10 12/31/11

ZvG: Zombies Vs Gladiators Robert's 2nd Draft (Script 87)

3.0 stars
(1)
12 08/31/11

ZvG: Zombies Vs Gladiators Robert's 1st Draft (Script 45)

No rating
15 08/25/11

About

I picked up screenwriting as a hobbie from my dad some time ago. I saw how much fun he was having and decided to give it a try. It gives me the chance to be creative and share my imagination with others. Currently writing two other scripts, a science fiction and a drama. Write on, Bob.
 

Reviews Robert Has Written

The Nevsky Prospect, Amazon's Test Movie

6 out of 6 people found the following review helpful:

Well done! The video quality and acting, superb. First rate job all around.

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
January 29, 2012
I enjoyed this piece from start to finish. The only thing I might add, would be to turn up the volume in some spots when it is difficult to make out what the actors are saying. Other than that, this is an awsome movie. A REAL MOVIE!

Robert L Brown
"Sir Frederich"
"The Alpha Transient"
 

Dhampira, Ed's Original Draft

3 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

I have to say this is one of the few vampire stories I've ever liked. I would buy a ticket to see a movie based on this piece.

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
June 30, 2011
I did not take notes during the read, but I'll give my overall feel. I wanted more action within the dialog. Without knowing more about this work, I would guess that you intend to direct a movie based on this script. Not sure if the tense is correct throughout or that all action could be filmed from a point blank perspective. BUT, I very much enjoyed this read. A very cool concept of a new kind of vampire that does not suck blood, but pulls the very soul out of it's victims. I could not stop reading. All of the actual places mentioned gave a real feel of the surroundings and the time jumps put the story together well. I felt so sorry for Nellie, waiting for her father to return from the sea all those years, very emotionally compelling. You did a very nice job man, a rare take on the vampire theme. Highly recomended for all to read, thanks, Bob.
 

PREMISE WARS, Vernon's 10th Draft

3 out of 5 people found the following review helpful:

The story skips around a bit as an incidental necessity for the type of comedy it is. The title fits the story well.

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
June 20, 2011
This zany story mix of "Neuro Obsessive Scriptamos Mania", has the characters going from a search for the "billion dollar logline" to "jet seats" and "fusor reactors" to world domination! However Dave and Dee finally find what they were searching for all along! A laugh a minute and a much fun read!
 

Favorite Movies

Avatar - Star Wars - Titanic - Top Gun - Rocky - Pirates...Caribbean - Second Hand Lions.
 

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